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I Once Saw the Beauty

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Enchanted1
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I Once Saw The Beauty

I once saw that beauty
In the stars and sunrise
Like the gleam in your eyes
They lit up the night skies
Enchantingly teasing
Spell bound I loved you
My world spun around
Not the sun but you
Then one day it happen
My world slowed to a stop
Dazed and confused
You were nowhere
But I have no complaints
Of them times that we shared
Because I once saw the beauty
Thats no longer there.

By. Michael J. Marshall
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~one voice~
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1 posted 07-10-99 01:03 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

I love this poem! Thank you so much for sharing it.

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~one voice~

For Myself, I live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James
Delilah
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2 posted 07-10-99 01:16 AM       View Profile for Delilah   Email Delilah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delilah

extremely moving! I loved it!

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hoot_owl_rn
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This is a wonderful piece of work, so sincere and moving. The flow is great.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
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