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Open Poetry #1

I Once Saw the Beauty

Enchanted1
New Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 3
Zion, IL United States

0 posted 1999-07-10 12:27 PM

I Once Saw The Beauty

I once saw that beauty
In the stars and sunrise
Like the gleam in your eyes
They lit up the night skies
Enchantingly teasing
Spell bound I loved you
My world spun around
Not the sun but you
Then one day it happen
My world slowed to a stop
Dazed and confused
You were nowhere
But I have no complaints
Of them times that we shared
Because I once saw the beauty
Thats no longer there.

By. Michael J. Marshall

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

1 posted 1999-07-10 01:03 AM

I love this poem! Thank you so much for sharing it.

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~one voice~

For Myself, I live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James

Delilah
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 36
The Wonderful America

2 posted 1999-07-10 01:16 AM

extremely moving! I loved it!

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Delilah
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"I think, therefore I am."
-Rene Descartes

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-07-10 08:45 AM

This is a wonderful piece of work, so sincere and moving. The flow is great.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

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