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Jealousy

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~one voice~
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0 posted 07-09-99 10:54 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

an attempt at a whim of rhyming...

I knew from the beginning
I was not the only one.
I really was not bothered,
for we had only just begun.
And then those words were whispered
and I fell in love with you.
I don't know what I was thinking-
thought I could be The One for you?
And when I saw she was still there
my heart did break apart.
Jealousy- an awful thing...
should've known right from the start.
And so here, I'm feeling saddened,
and a little bit depressed.
I don't know what I will say
when this issue will be pressed.
the fault lies in my own hands...
I have done this to myself.
But to do... I do not know-
put my heart back on the shelf?
Call me crazy... call me young...
I will not deny...
I'm jealous that you love her too.
Jealousy, no lie.

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~one voice~

For Myself, I live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James
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DreamEvil
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1 posted 07-10-99 12:58 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I feel this too, quite a light your shedding.

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~one voice~
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2 posted 07-10-99 10:38 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you Mr. Evil! Your praise has always given me confidense!

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~one voice~

For Myself, I live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James
Delilah
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since 07-08-99
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The Wonderful America


3 posted 07-10-99 11:36 AM       View Profile for Delilah   Email Delilah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delilah

Once again I loved this poem. Beautifully written, one voice!

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Delilah
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"I think, therefore I am."
-Rene Descartes
azblond
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since 07-01-99
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The Steamy Desert


4 posted 07-10-99 01:04 PM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

I guess we all succomb to the little green monster form time to time (but who says he's little, he can take over my every thought). Well written...I enjoyed this one too.

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Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...
Kelly
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5 posted 07-10-99 01:53 PM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

Oh yeah. Jealousy can be so ugly. I've always tried to pretend I don't feel it when it rears it's ugly head. I'm sure I'm not fooling anyone. Great poem.
 
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