How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #1 Archive
 Two souls still dreaming
 1 2
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Two souls still dreaming

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
JANNA
Member
since 06-18-99
Posts 53
arlington, tx usa


0 posted 07-09-99 09:55 PM       View Profile for JANNA   Email JANNA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JANNA



Dreams soar through our hearts carelessly,
Sending inconsistent desires to our souls.
Impending sorrows will follow,
For dreams and reality rarely coencide.

Our lives follow sparadic paths.
There are hills that take us up and down,
And detours which lure us off course.
But those who are lucky find a companion whose path meets at the same moment.
And they are destined to walk together to the end of their ways.

But the ultimate gift is for a careless drifting dream to break through the doors of reality,
Just as a wonderful person walks onto your path.
This becomes a miracle - once in a million years,
Only persons of a simple mind would look past and walk on by.

I have found such a miracle - my dreams became reality when you walked into my life!

Jana Thompson
(I wrote this for my husband when we were dating!)
© Copyright 1999 JANNA - All Rights Reserved
jfreak
Member
since 06-17-99
Posts 311
Yuma, AZ, USA


1 posted 07-10-99 02:46 AM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

Very powerfully put. Your heart is totally felt in this one. It is also a very well written poem that doesn't contain a rhyme scheme. You've done good. *winK*

Jfreak
JANNA
Member
since 06-18-99
Posts 53
arlington, tx usa


2 posted 07-10-99 10:42 AM       View Profile for JANNA   Email JANNA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JANNA

thanks jfreak! I wasn't sure if this really classified as poetry or just a thought sequence, so i really appreciate your compliments! oh and *wink wink* back at ya!
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #1 >> Two souls still dreaming Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors