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My Eyes Shut |
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Aly Junior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 35 |
There's many a reason, (that I very much believe,) will take you to your end. But the most important, is all natural and free. So goodbye to all. My time has come. I will remember you, and everything you've done. So now I will leave, to answer my call. My eyes are slowly closing, and my eyes shut. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Simple and peaseful. The best way to go. Nicely done and welcome. P.S. Thanks for looking in on the chess game. |
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Aly Junior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 35 |
your welcome, and thanks for responding! It's my first free verse.  |
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Emmy Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194KY |
That's pretty good for your first free verse! I didn't know you wrote that kind of poetry Aly... A nice altering of style. May your time to go be as natural and free as you wish... |
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Aly Junior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 35 |
Guess your on, huh? I can't send u an e-mail because My internet is in my parents account. I can'y send u stuff from my account, but I guess I will send it from my parents, so be ready.hehehe |
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Aly Junior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 35 |
I don't know your address, what is it? Send it to mcbrowns@juno.com,k? me |
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Emmy Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194KY |
address as in my house #, or e mail? |
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Aly Junior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 35 |
e-mail,duh!!!!  |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Nice and concise,wonderful verse. ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. DreamEvil© |
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