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My Eyes Shut

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Aly
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0 posted 07-09-99 08:23 PM       View Profile for Aly   Email Aly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aly

There's many a reason,
(that I very much believe,)
will take you to your end.
But the most important,
is all natural and free.
So goodbye to all.
My time has come.
I will remember you,
and everything you've done.
So now I will leave,
to answer my call.
My eyes are slowly closing,
and my eyes shut.
© Copyright 1999 Aly - All Rights Reserved
Andrew Scott
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1 posted 07-09-99 08:43 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Simple and peaseful. The best way to go. Nicely done and welcome.
P.S. Thanks for looking in on the chess game.
Aly
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2 posted 07-09-99 08:55 PM       View Profile for Aly   Email Aly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aly

your welcome, and thanks for responding! It's my first free verse.
Emmy
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3 posted 07-09-99 09:23 PM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

That's pretty good for your first free verse! I didn't know you wrote that kind of poetry Aly... A nice altering of style. May your time to go be as natural and free as you wish...
Aly
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4 posted 07-09-99 09:29 PM       View Profile for Aly   Email Aly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aly

Guess your on, huh? I can't send u an e-mail because My internet is in my parents account. I can'y send u stuff from my account, but I guess I will send it from my parents, so be ready.hehehe
Aly
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5 posted 07-09-99 09:31 PM       View Profile for Aly   Email Aly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aly

I don't know your address, what is it? Send it to mcbrowns@juno.com,k?

me
Emmy
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6 posted 07-09-99 09:32 PM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

address as in my house #, or e mail?
Aly
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7 posted 07-09-99 09:36 PM       View Profile for Aly   Email Aly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aly

e-mail,duh!!!!
DreamEvil
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8 posted 07-09-99 10:11 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Nice and concise,wonderful verse.

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