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azblond
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since 1999-07-01
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The Steamy Desert

0 posted 1999-07-09 03:03 PM


Remember

When she tempts you with her delicious charms
Remember it was me
Who you once held tightly in your arms
Spent from ecstasy

When she romps past you in skirts too tight
Remember it was me
Who once bedazzled you on sight
With my own beauty

When she teases you with her walk
Remember it was me
Who once left you unable to talk
Fulfilled emotionally

When she tells you that I’ll never know
Remember it was me
The one you promised to never let go
Together eternally

When she dances too close to you one night
Remember it was me
Who once made you put up a fight
And a solemn plea

When she tries to claim you as her own
Remember it was me
Who gave you love like you’ve never known
Assurance and security

When she tells you she loves you true
Remember it was me
Who stands beside in all you do
Loving faithfully

And when she tells you you’re a foolish guy
Remember it was me
Who made you realize it’s not worth the lie
Together we always will be.


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Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

© Copyright 1999 MiChelle Van Vleet - All Rights Reserved
Craig
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since 1999-06-10
Posts 444

1 posted 1999-07-09 03:30 PM


Your words on my deaf ears fell
Yet my eyes can see the light
And simple truths you tell
With passions gracious might

Words no entry into my closed mind
But I read from the heart
All the beauty that I find
Within your craft and art

azblond
Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637
The Steamy Desert
2 posted 1999-07-09 03:41 PM


Such flattery in the form of prose
I'm honored you feel that way
After such eloquent words you used...
Thank You is all I can say.

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Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

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