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mia
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 118


0 posted 1999-07-09 02:38 PM



i love.
i love more than anything in this world
my love
i give all to my love
for it makes me
i take all from my love
for it gives unselfishly
i dream my love
i breathe my love
but still i remain.
i remain true to myself
i remain as blue as the ocean
i remain as pure as the sky
i remain a lie through the truth
but still,
i remain.

i love.
i love morning love making
when the sunlight comes through my window
and hits his already hot body
i love his breath on my neck after midnight
i love lingering afternoon kisses
that last forever
i love the wind of his voice
that make my whole person tremble

i love.
i love to love him softly
i love to love him hard
i love to love him happily
i love to love him carelessly
i love to love him
under the great big maple tree
in my backyard.

© Copyright 1999 mia - All Rights Reserved
jfreak
Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306
Yuma, AZ, USA
1 posted 1999-07-10 02:57 AM


This is definately different. I wonder one thing though.........do you love him?

Good poem

Jfreak

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