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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

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0 posted 1999-07-09 06:31 AM

After much consideration, I decided to post this here, sorry for the length.

Heady perfume rising from your hair, the sight of your liquid eyes, brightens my night and prevents
my despair.

The curve of your cheek and the taste of your neck make my only regret, taking so long to speak.

Kissing my way to your milky shoulders and inhaling the scent of your flesh I am maddened by desire
mounting ever higher
and desperately want you
out of your dress.

Watching the heave of your chest through that sheerest dress drives my hands onward putting my control to the test.
One button at a time, I'll make your
trust mine and upon
your pleasures my
eyes will dine.

Feeling you tense as the last button comes loose, I hesitate
only to find your desire
matches my own
as you lean harder into my fire
and I hear you moan.

My hands knead the smoothness of your skin, where to begin?While kissing your neck, my hands direct
a chorus of feelings within,
none of them
suspect.

Losing myself in your eyes, twin pools of midnight dew, my hands travel down and around, pulling
you to the ground
where I will
start anew.

Dropping to the ground at your side as you try to hide the trembling gripping you deep inside,
I then sit astride your thighs
And gaze deeply into
Your eyes.

As my hands caress each curve of your velvet breast I must surely confess, not only am I striving to keep from arriving
But also my dear, to conceal my own fear
Of being like all the rest.

Lowering myself down, pressing you into the ground, I slowly begin to kiss your perfect face from forehead to chin
Your mouth opens with a low, throaty, moan
As I gently I slip my tongue in.

From arching back to heaving thighs, low-throated moans and thunderous cries, we travel from peak to peak without
The need to speak, giving each other a gift
That heals the rift
Of distance.

Our passion spent, our ardor gone, with the afternoon grown long, with a gentle caress and deepest regret, I tenderly help you
On with your dress.

©1999 DreamEvil

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I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say.
DreamEvil©

azblond
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since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

1 posted 1999-07-09 02:38 PM

Wow DreamEvil, you took my breath away.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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2 posted 1999-07-09 03:54 PM

Very heavy....and not only the breathing. I enjoyed every word.

blueloon
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 161
NY

3 posted 1999-07-09 04:08 PM

With much ado, I thank you for posting your poem here. Bravo!!!
blueloon

Moonlight
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since 1999-06-25

Posts 105
Auburn, Alabama USA

4 posted 1999-07-09 04:53 PM

Great, Dreamie,
I told you that you could finish it...
And finish you did...very nicely.

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

5 posted 1999-07-09 06:47 PM

Thank you all, I was more than a bit nervous posting this piece. My first attempt at this style.

Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

6 posted 1999-07-09 08:16 PM

Wow....ya, that's very good! For your first attempt with this style, you did very well. Of all the poems I've seen of yours.....I like this one best. I don't know what that says of me....but anyway, I like it.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

7 posted 1999-07-09 08:35 PM

Morning used to be my favorite time of the day, but after reading this, I've changed to the afternoon. Delightful (no pun intended), delicious (pun intended). Now, please excuse me while I call my office. I want to have afternoons off for awhile..you never know.. it's best to be prepared!

This is good stuff! No need to be nervous - you can relax, your first time is behind you.

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

8 posted 1999-07-09 08:49 PM

Whew! Thought it bordered on being too pornographic for this forum. Thanks for the vindication.

thursdayschild
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since 1999-07-01

Posts 169
Houston, Tx.

9 posted 1999-07-10 07:18 PM

can I breath now? intense, passionate,
wonderfully erotic. I like the structure
of this one, with the first line of each
stanza long, and the others, shorter. Don't
think I've ever seen that before...very
effective for this poem. great work!

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

10 posted 1999-07-10 11:02 PM

Thank you, I did it like that for the font, trying to bring each verse to a close.

leelew
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since 1999-07-10

Posts 89
highmount,ny,usa

11 posted 1999-07-10 11:28 PM

And you were worried! Still tingling as I re-read it!

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

12 posted 1999-07-11 01:21 AM

Thank you, L.

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