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azblond
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since 1999-07-01
Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

0 posted 1999-07-09 01:59 AM


Little Girl Blue

Little Girl Blue, please don’t cry
Though I cannot explain for the life of me why
Your life so young has known too much pain
I only want to see you find happiness again

The cruel world has been so hard on you
I know all too well why you’re Little Girl Blue
Just trust my words that it must get better
Dry your eyes before mine get wetter.

I don’t know why your Daddy has gone
I dare not explain why Mommy couldn’t go on
I don’t want to make promises I cannot deliver
But it breaks my heart so to see your lip quiver

I’ll lend you my shoulder to dry your tears
I’ll do my best to ease your fears
Just know I’m here, Little Girl Blue
Once in my life, I was that little girl too.


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Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

© Copyright 1999 MiChelle Van Vleet - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-09 02:03 AM


Inspires less than a dry eye, perfect for my mood.

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I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say.
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elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
2 posted 1999-07-12 02:52 PM


just what my soul needed today

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i never call a poem "nice" or such,
for that would not be saying much



Kelly
Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 145

3 posted 1999-08-29 02:29 AM


Such a sad poem. Great job.

(It's nice to see elvira's comment still intact. I miss her poetry and her kind replies)

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