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Living On

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jfreak
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Yuma, AZ, USA


0 posted 07-09-99 01:11 AM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jfreak

If thou woulds't love me
Full width and breadth
Of thine bosom's heart
Whose beating doth I long for
To hear thumping in thy chest
More so I woulds't long
thou replace thine bosom's dieing heart
With mine and doth give me thine
Surely thou love's strength
Will compel this lonely wretch
To take thine cankerous heart
For we shall certainly live tho
Death grace my presence
Mine life lives on in thy
© Copyright 1999 jfreak - All Rights Reserved
azblond
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The Steamy Desert


1 posted 07-09-99 02:01 AM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

Bravo!! Take a bow Jfreak, Take a bow!

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Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...
jfreak
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2 posted 07-09-99 12:43 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

(bows respectively in thanks)
blueloon
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NY


3 posted 07-09-99 12:49 PM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

Beautifully written. You have stolen my heart with those elegant words of yours!
jfreak
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4 posted 07-09-99 12:50 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

thank you blueloon for your kind words.

J
Kelly
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5 posted 07-11-99 03:40 AM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

Loved it.
hoot_owl_rn
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Wonderfully written...I liken this very much to one of Shakespears sonnets. You outdid yourself with this one, you should be proud!
jfreak
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7 posted 07-12-99 03:03 AM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

Again thank you Kelly and Hooter for such kind words. It is totally appreciated.

Jfreak
 
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