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Living On |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA 
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If thou woulds't love me Full width and breadth Of thine bosom's heart Whose beating doth I long for To hear thumping in thy chest More so I woulds't long thou replace thine bosom's dieing heart With mine and doth give me thine Surely thou love's strength Will compel this lonely wretch To take thine cankerous heart For we shall certainly live tho Death grace my presence Mine life lives on in thy |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Bravo!! Take a bow Jfreak, Take a bow! ------------------ Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
(bows respectively in thanks) |
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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
Beautifully written. You have stolen my heart with those elegant words of yours! |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
thank you blueloon for your kind words. J |
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Kelly Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 145 |
Loved it. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderfully written...I liken this very much to one of Shakespears sonnets. You outdid yourself with this one, you should be proud! |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Again thank you Kelly and Hooter for such kind words. It is totally appreciated. Jfreak |
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