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grandiloquent
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0 posted 07-08-99 11:49 PM       View Profile for grandiloquent   Email grandiloquent   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit grandiloquent's Home Page   View IP for grandiloquent

daybreak hinting around the skylight
CDs blasting serene melodies
feeling giddy in the Morningafter
as the cold arranges what I think
cozy-shimmy down in my four-poster
empty now except for me
dozy with your taste in my mouth
& the exquisite commotion that you leave
shadowprints my body over, waning warm spots in my bed
must leave the covers the way they tangled
when, with watch advice, you shyly fled
mind slipping easy with the flu of you
fever burning up my eyes and lips and fingertips
dizzy stars around my head --
me sinking in my stupid grin
vain attempts to sleep to dream about you
as I giggle and push the pillow in
© Copyright 1999 Megan - All Rights Reserved
~one voice~
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1 posted 07-09-99 12:09 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

This us absolutely breathtaking! I love it! I really do! It is so vivid in my mind! I'm looking forward to reading more!

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~one voice~

For Myself, I live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James
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2 posted 07-25-99 09:30 PM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

Perfectly passionate. Love your way with words! Great poem, thanks for sharing
poetFemmeFatale
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3 posted 07-25-99 09:34 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Wowweee!! Makes me feel naughty - like I've been watching you....he he he Excellent choice of words to paint a picture so vivid I thought I was there!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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4 posted 07-25-99 11:42 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I can visualize, and taste, this poem.

(and, btw, I have responded to EVERY poem you have written, in both forums. Do I count?)

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 07-25-99).]
grandiloquent
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Balladeer: Yes, you count, thank you very much for your comments (my appreciation also extends to all others who have bothered to add their two cents). I'm learning the value of "reload" on this page ... be patient with me.
 
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