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The Maze

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Joshua
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0 posted 07-08-99 11:29 PM       View Profile for Joshua   Email Joshua   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joshua

Show me what you know
Take me through your maze
Pull my body with your anger
Let me feel your ending phase
I know your body is at war
With the presence of your mind
The body pulls at the aching soul
I watch your sanity unwind

Tell me of the pain inside
I want to feel that too
I want to feel your ending phase
Show me what you can do
Throw my mind against your wall
Of hate toward yourself
Tear my ego apart from me
And put it on anger's shelf

Tell me if this is your ending phase
I can't go farther now
To take this pain is beyond myself
How do you do it? How?
Save me from your ending phase
I can not bare this hate
Save me from your ending phase
I do not want your hate
© Copyright 1999 Joshua - All Rights Reserved
~one voice~
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1 posted 07-09-99 12:05 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Joshua, this poem is so expressive and sad... I really like it! Thank you.

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~one voice~

For Myself, I live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James
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2 posted 07-09-99 09:21 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is fine writing! Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you!






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