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Joshua Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 43phoenix,az,usa |
Show me what you know Take me through your maze Pull my body with your anger Let me feel your ending phase I know your body is at war With the presence of your mind The body pulls at the aching soul I watch your sanity unwind Tell me of the pain inside I want to feel that too I want to feel your ending phase Show me what you can do Throw my mind against your wall Of hate toward yourself Tear my ego apart from me And put it on anger's shelf Tell me if this is your ending phase I can't go farther now To take this pain is beyond myself How do you do it? How? Save me from your ending phase I can not bare this hate Save me from your ending phase I do not want your hate |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Joshua, this poem is so expressive and sad... I really like it! Thank you. ------------------ ~one voice~ For Myself, I live, Live intensely and am fed by life, and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is fine writing! Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you!  [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 07-09-99).] |
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