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Evil's Dream

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sea_of_okc
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0 posted 07-08-99 04:49 PM       View Profile for sea_of_okc   Email sea_of_okc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for sea_of_okc

I shall warp and twist your mind
All of your secret fears I shall find
I shall dominate all of mankind
Humanity belongs to me

I shall cause hatred, strife and war
When you cry for relief you shall suffer more
I am the victor you needn't keep score
The world belongs to me

I shall torment and torture your soul
Pervert and abase you then swallow you whole
There is no mercy in a heart black as coal
Hades belongs to me

Minions of evil respond to my call
On all true believers my wrath shall fall
Crush faith and hope until evil rules all
Heaven belongs to me

When I am faced with that final fight
I shall prevail and douse His light
None shall survive my endless night
Eternity belongs to me...

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Steven Seaman
A burden shared is a burden lightened
A life shared is a life enriched

© Copyright 1999 Steven Thomas Seaman - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


1 posted 07-08-99 05:23 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Marvelous! One of your best so far!!
Emmy
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2 posted 07-08-99 06:10 PM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

You strike fear in the very pit of my heart and soul! I agree with "the deVine one", one of your greatest. This poem was so threatening it was wonderful! What power you gave to evil...
Andrew Scott
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since 06-24-99
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3 posted 07-08-99 07:04 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

I think you captured the sub-conscienceness of Evil perfectly. Very, very strong and final... one can almost hear the final welp of hope as it's light is extinguished beneath the sole of darkness and despair.
Have a nice day
Balladeer
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4 posted 07-08-99 09:08 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

sea...you're a devil! (albeit a very talented one)!
azblond
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since 07-01-99
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The Steamy Desert


5 posted 07-08-99 09:42 PM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

I shiver and shudder, what an awesome affect you have with this one!

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Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...
DreamEvil
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6 posted 07-09-99 01:35 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Perfect description of my mood, I applaud this piece!!

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I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say.


wayoutwalt
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since 06-22-99
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TEXAS (it's all big)


7 posted 07-09-99 01:37 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

i love the title in your dreams lucifer..great poem
seaslady
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since 06-25-99
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8 posted 07-09-99 04:02 PM       View Profile for seaslady   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for seaslady

hmmm.... very interesting....
Craig
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9 posted 07-09-99 06:06 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig

Congratulations Sea another excellent poem.
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