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Delilah
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since 1999-07-08
Posts 36
The Wonderful America

0 posted 1999-07-08 02:48 PM


I cry
Curled up in bed
The silence is deadly
Nobody is there to save me
Falling


I was really depressed when I wrote this poem.

© Copyright 1999 Delilah - All Rights Reserved
elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
1 posted 1999-07-08 03:21 PM


hope you are feeling better now?
so often, putting feelings down on paper takes away their ragged edge, does it not?

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i never call a poem "nice" or such,
for that would not be saying much

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