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Fore'er My Love

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Tim
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Within my heart
You do reside
Since day you slept
And mourner's cried.

I hear your voice
On whisp'ring wind
Sweet words of love
That you do send.

I see your face
In heav'ns above
In warmth of sun
I feel your love.

And when rain falls
From out the sky
My face is wet
From tears you cry.

When nighttime comes
In dreams retire
You touch my heart
With thy desire.

Within my heart
You'll e'er remain
No longer feel
The lance of pain.

A precious gift
Was gave by thee
I ne'er shall lose
Your love to me.



[This message has been edited by Tim (edited 07-08-99).]
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1 posted 07-08-99 02:55 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Very heart-felt emotion here......
Tim
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2 posted 07-08-99 05:36 PM       View Profile for Tim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tim

Thank you...
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Great portrayal of a mix between love coming from the depth of the soul and infatuation. A beautiful promise in that "within my heart you'll e'er remain"! You gave love rhyme... and did it wonderfully!
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4 posted 07-17-99 03:20 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is too good to be hidden at the bottom.
Delores Hall
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This is good.
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6 posted 07-17-99 04:44 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

...you do reside
...since day you slept
...that you do send
...in warmth of sun
...in dreams retire
... you'll e'er remain
...no longer feel
...was gave by thee
...I ne'er shall lose

You have sacrificed quality for flow. Find a way to have both, as I know you can.
Tim
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7 posted 07-17-99 05:35 PM       View Profile for Tim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tim

I apologize for my denseness...
vocabulary... grammar... both? The contractions I can work on... English major I was not...
I really appreciate the comment...
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