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mia
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0 posted 07-08-99 02:40 PM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mia


i want to ride the waves
of your ocean blue
until i can drown
in your love

ocean blue,
where the distance is near
where the feeling is clear

ocean blue,
where the sky and water make love
where touches come from up above

ocean blue,
where time stands still
where you always will

ocean blue,
where lovers yearn
where passions burn

i want to ride the waves
of your ocean blue
until i can drown
in your love

mia


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1 posted 07-08-99 02:59 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

A very nice sentiment here......
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Beautiful. I have oceans of my own that I would love to ride the waves of, so I know exactly what you mean. And your rhyming is excellent for someone who's first language is not english! You seem like a very accomplished poet. Looking forward to seeing more...
~~~ Emmmy ~~~
mia
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3 posted 07-09-99 07:58 AM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mia

Emmy, you give me too much credit for I am not an accomplished poet but a mear dreamer who's head is filled with millions of words. writing words for me is a sort of release.
thanks for the nice comments...

and Balladeer... thank you for the comment, it is a real honor for me that you took the time to comment.

M
 
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