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My Special Someone!

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Leigh Anne
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since 06-15-99
Posts 49
Scottsboro, AL USA


0 posted 07-08-99 01:46 PM       View Profile for Leigh Anne   Email Leigh Anne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Leigh Anne's Home Page   View IP for Leigh Anne

Okay everyone, i just got some "NEWS" so this poem sounds somewhat "immature" compared to some of my others...guess it's my giddiness!

My Special Someone

I woke up this morning with you inside of me
It felt good to have someone else around,
Someone besides just me

My friends say that I should get rid of you
That having you around will only stop me from reaching anywhere in life
But I'll prove them all wrong

I've waited a long time for someone like you to come in my life
I guess the things that we always hope for,
Find a way of showing up when we least expect it

As the days drag into weeks and weeks into months,
Our relationship becomes stronger while my friends pull away,
Finding excuses to stay out of our lives

But I don't mind
I love you
And I know you will grow to love me too

I feel a rush of liquid inside me as you finally pull out
The pain of my first time overwhelms me,
And I hear your cries mixing with my own

When it is all over, I cradle you in my arms
Gazing into your beautiful blue eyes,
Eyes much like my own

I made the right decision, I think to myself
Stroking your wet hair
My special someone,
My baby
© Copyright 1999 Leigh Anne - All Rights Reserved
Balladeer
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1 posted 07-08-99 02:52 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

THAT could be the greatest opening line in the history of the written word!
Leigh Anne
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since 06-15-99
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Scottsboro, AL USA


2 posted 07-08-99 03:22 PM       View Profile for Leigh Anne   Email Leigh Anne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Leigh Anne's Home Page   View IP for Leigh Anne

You have always been so kind about my writings balladeer.....thank you for your continued support....8) (that's an pathetic smile)
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