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~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
Posts 668
Billings, MT USA


0 posted 07-08-99 09:40 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

Traipsing o'er these keys,
You have me searching for something to say...
Your words leave me speechless...
Your thoughts leave me breathless...
and I know your impression will forever stay
and put my mind at ease.

Shall e'er we find each other's face?
Kiss the eyes of the one who can see?...
Your words leave me speechless...
Your thoughts leave me breathless...
and I know that you would stay with me
and put the night to pace.

You are the first to name me Dearheart...
the name of an elegant swan...
Your words leave me speechless...
Your thoughts leave me breathless...
You are my very own Don Juan;
my saviour from the start.

And will we ever solve the mystery
of love between the reigned?
Your words leave me speechless...
Your thoughts leave me breathless...
And your kiss will be forever stained
upon my memory.

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~one voice~

For Myself, I live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James
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Emmy
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Posts 204
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1 posted 07-08-99 12:29 PM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

Your POEM left me breathless! Excellent, truly excellent. You may be "one voice", but you're one voice I look forward to hearing more from!
Delilah
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since 07-08-99
Posts 36
The Wonderful America


2 posted 07-08-99 03:01 PM       View Profile for Delilah   Email Delilah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delilah

Who's Don Juan???


I loved your poem! It was beautiful. I really liked your word choices. Beautiful!




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Delilah
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Balladeer
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since 06-05-99
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA


3 posted 07-08-99 04:27 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

one voice stands out well.....
~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
Posts 668
Billings, MT USA


4 posted 07-08-99 07:15 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank You So Much, all of you. Your replies really boost my confidence! Thanx!
Oh, and Don Juan is a legend known as the world's greatest lover...

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~one voice~

For Myself, I live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James
thursdayschild
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since 07-01-99
Posts 174
Houston, Tx.


5 posted 07-08-99 11:19 PM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

Oh, this is awesome! Love it. The words,
and feelings just flow. This one is very
meaningful. Nice work
DreamEvil
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since 06-22-99
Posts 2442


6 posted 07-09-99 05:30 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

One voice, I think not. More like a chorus, raised in heavenly song. I'm moved by this piece.

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I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say.
DreamEvilŠ


 
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