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Your Words...Your Thoughts |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Traipsing o'er these keys, You have me searching for something to say... Your words leave me speechless... Your thoughts leave me breathless... and I know your impression will forever stay and put my mind at ease. Shall e'er we find each other's face? Kiss the eyes of the one who can see?... Your words leave me speechless... Your thoughts leave me breathless... and I know that you would stay with me and put the night to pace. You are the first to name me Dearheart... the name of an elegant swan... Your words leave me speechless... Your thoughts leave me breathless... You are my very own Don Juan; my saviour from the start. And will we ever solve the mystery of love between the reigned? Your words leave me speechless... Your thoughts leave me breathless... And your kiss will be forever stained upon my memory. ------------------ ~one voice~ For Myself, I live, Live intensely and am fed by life, and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James |
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Emmy Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194KY |
Your POEM left me breathless! Excellent, truly excellent. You may be "one voice", but you're one voice I look forward to hearing more from! |
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Delilah Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 36The Wonderful America |
Who's Don Juan??? I loved your poem! It was beautiful. I really liked your word choices. Beautiful! ------------------ Delilah :) |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
one voice stands out well..... |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank You So Much, all of you. Your replies really boost my confidence! Thanx!  Oh, and Don Juan is a legend known as the world's greatest lover... ------------------ ~one voice~ For Myself, I live, Live intensely and am fed by life, and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
Oh, this is awesome! Love it. The words, and feelings just flow. This one is very meaningful. Nice work |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
One voice, I think not. More like a chorus, raised in heavenly song. I'm moved by this piece. ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. DreamEvil© |
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