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Inner War

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Ominous
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0 posted 07-08-99 02:40 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

Sometimes you feel like you're living
In the bottom of a whole.
Separated from all the world.

Or in the middle of a war where the
Coldeness you receive,
Makes your blood run cold.

And when the power to conquer
Your hate, rule your fears,
And recieve the love you dream of,
Is all in your sights, just not
In your possesion.

and when your living in a world,
Full of hate and despair.
Fighting for freedom, and understanding,
A war you can't possibly win.

A war within yourself.

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I am but a shadow, lost within this world of darkness
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1 posted 07-08-99 03:07 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

This actually seems hopeful, to me. I like it.

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2 posted 07-26-99 03:09 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

I can never express my full thanks to you Dream.
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