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Ominous
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0 posted 07-08-99 02:28 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

Things are changing all around,
people, places, me.
No one really notices,
no one wants to see.

I don't understand it,
no one really does.
Except I try my best to,
so I can change what was.

I've made a mistake,
and now I must pay.
I have to live with my choice,
and let the past lay.

People come and people go,
and somethings remain the same.
I've made mistakes and some wrong turns,
but I've made it a long way.

I've been hurt and my trust betrayed,
used, abused, and pained.
My hearts been broke many a titme,
but it's a time I can't erase.

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I am but a shadow, lost within this world of darkness
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DreamEvil
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1 posted 07-08-99 03:01 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Poignant and true, this moved me.

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elvira
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2 posted 07-08-99 03:35 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

however painful it may seem, the meaning of life still remains to search for its meaning.....we all travel down the road you have so poetically described

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for that would not be saying much
Ominous
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3 posted 07-12-99 08:35 PM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

Thank you both so much.
Elvira, you are very deeply insighted, thank you so much for your thoughts. =)
Ominous
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4 posted 07-26-99 03:04 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

I just want to thank you again.
You have made me feel welcome, and helped boost my confidence. For this I will be eternally grateful.

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I am but a shadow, lost within this world of darkness
angel girl
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5 posted 07-26-99 09:17 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

great poem,
it's sad, but it's true. is life trying to teach us a lesson?
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