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please let me know what you guys think! --- Darkness Falls

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Delilah
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since 07-08-99
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The Wonderful America


0 posted 07-08-99 02:04 AM       View Profile for Delilah   Email Delilah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delilah

Shadows lurk amongst the figures
Shadows prance along the walls.
Shadows cease the face with anger
How mysteriously they crawl.
On every night there is a shadow
Who stands hidden by them all.
Revealing himself only
When the golden sun calls.
It is a dream, I do not know
Oh how faint it all seems now.
I have to wait again till night
To fall, fall, fall.
In the daze I lay agian
Enveloped in my dream.
Awaiting the arrival
Of the well-known scene.
And so he comes drifting
Floating like a cloud.
Noiseless and dreary,
Neither softly nor too loud.
And there he hovers all night long
Passing the darkness away.
Till morning comes again
And he fades into the moon.
I open my eyes and notice
Not a soul is in my room.
This shadow, oh my shadow
Has gotten quite a part.
He's gotten a piece,
A portion, a place...inside my heart.
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Ominous
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1 posted 07-08-99 02:51 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

What a great poem. It flows nicely, and creats such an image in my mind. Beautifully done.
DreamEvil
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2 posted 07-08-99 02:59 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Masterful blast of Darkness.

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~one voice~
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3 posted 07-08-99 09:54 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

I really like this poem! It grabs my attention, and flows nicely. It also stirred up a little suspense! More, more!

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~one voice~

For Myself, I live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James
 
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