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Untitled ~~ Love

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DeadSexyKitty
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0 posted 07-08-99 12:30 AM       View Profile for DeadSexyKitty   Email DeadSexyKitty   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DeadSexyKitty's Home Page   View IP for DeadSexyKitty

Untitled
Its hard for me to swallow
I cant seem to get a breath
My cheast is slowing caving in
This must be my untimely death

I think of you more and more
The way you talk, you laugh, you sing
I think of how I need you here
I think of everything

This is all so crazy
Too sudden, too rash, too scary
You think of me as just a friend
I think of you quite the contrary

My fondess for you is based on what?
Not your eyes, your walk, your hair
I relish the way my heart beats fast
Just knowing that you're there

By now you're feeling flattered
Feeling a little sad for me too
You know you don't feel the same
You don't love me, like I do you.


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Kitty Kat
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tulip
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1 posted 07-08-99 12:44 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

I know how you feel!!!
Delilah
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2 posted 07-08-99 01:58 AM       View Profile for Delilah   Email Delilah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delilah

I felt so sad after reading your poem. It was beautiful - especially since I can relate.
Poet deVine
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3 posted 07-08-99 10:47 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! I think a lot of us can relate to this poem. It's sad but oh so true. Just checked out your site..very cool. Loved the lady on the front!


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Emmy
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I could really relate to your poem, and it put in words the situation I am in right now. Bravo, and welcome! Looking forward to seeing more from ya!
DeadSexyKitty
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5 posted 07-08-99 04:40 PM       View Profile for DeadSexyKitty   Email DeadSexyKitty   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DeadSexyKitty's Home Page   View IP for DeadSexyKitty

Thanks for the positive response. This was the first poem I ever wrote. I wrote this one night when I was really frustrated with my best guy friend. He has a girlfriend, but when I'm with him it seems like just us... like he likes me too... and then just when we both get really close to admitting it one of us changes the subject.. usually him. :-) Ah well... we've all been there... It's good to know I'm not alone.

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