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Domina Starwolf
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since 1999-07-07
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0 posted 1999-07-07 03:51 PM


Betrayal
Angish
Pain
Deceit
Back stabbing
Heart wrenching
A nose stuck in the air
Low howls to and from there
Head throbbing
Eyes burning
Low growls roll out of it's throat
Fangs glisten
Claws listen
For the sound of ripping flesh
A leap. Then...
Bang! Flash! Claw! Thrash!
And a little whimpering cry.
His job here is done
The hunter takes his gun
And waits for the sound of death.
It comes and it leaves
sifting quietly through the trees
While I lay still on the ground.

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-07-17 08:38 PM


Reading at the bottom, found this...free verse isn't it?
Janus
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since 1999-07-17
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2 posted 1999-07-17 09:27 PM


savage power and the animal instinct for survival... love the shocking details of eating livers and the like, and the profound ending......
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