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blueloon
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 161
NY

0 posted 1999-07-07 02:19 PM


Cool air
blanded
upon my
face.

The potency
of
love that
blinked
at lost
time
met at
soft
parted lips.

For arms
gained
vigor. Effortlessly
fingertips
modernized old
skin
coming of
newness.

The heart
no
longer chased
it's
pray of
time;
time of abidding.

The night
came
and quickly
went.
Years came
and slowly
left.

You and
I
alone within.
You
and I
together
with another.
You and
I
now together.

[This message has been edited by blueloon (edited 07-07-99).]

[This message has been edited by blueloon (edited 08-22-99).]

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mia
Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 118

1 posted 1999-07-08 09:18 AM


I really like the way that you play with the words... I would really like to read more of your work...

mia


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