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mia
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i built a mountain of disapiontments
over my reckless head
for you to climb

i cried an ocean of failures
under my dancing feet
for you to swim

i exhaled a sky of mistakes
from my dry mouth
for you to breath

i gave too many sweet nothings
from my empty hands
for you to take

i stirred thunder storms of anger
from my cold eyes
for you to survive

i ran all the way home
to find you there
to find you gone
because i never forgave

i ran all the way home
to find me as a woman
to find me as a little girl
still wanting to please you

daddy, i'm so sorry...
i loved you too much
and i lost...
again.


Sorry...


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It's amazing how we search to please our parents. Very touching sence of self discovery.

blueloon
 
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