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hoot_owl_rn
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0 posted 1999-07-07 09:09 AM


fireworks

fireworks
light the sky
a myriad of colors
flashing lights
twinkling like stars
falling like spilled glitter
i close my eyes
still to see
fireworks
sparked by
the nearness of you

© Copyright 1999 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 1999-07-08 10:31 AM


I would be interested to hear some thoughts on this. Thanks.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-06-22 02:25 PM


I think this is wonderful!!! What a way to describe someone's presence!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 2000-06-23 05:24 PM


Thanks Lizzie...this was written by my older sister who way underestimates her work. I thought it was great  

To love means never to be afraid of the windstorms of life: should you shield the canyons from the windstorms you would never see the true beauty of their carvings. ~Elizabeth Kubler-Ross

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
4 posted 2000-07-05 01:03 PM


Well, Hoot, tell your sister I think she is a great poet if this piece of work is anything to go by!!! I really enjoyed the read!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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