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to please you daddy
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to please you daddy |
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mia Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 118 |
I've been running all the way to nowhere hiding behind those glass walls that you have raised aroung me to keep me from myself I've been spitting lies in the world's face to be what you needed me to be forsaking myself forgetting who I was I had to be that perfect picture you would hang over the fireplace I was hung I am still hagning over the fire burning to please you daddy |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is a very powerful and moving piece. |
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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
Another job well done, Mia. Very touching and speaks much truth to the reader. blueloon |
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