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mia
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0 posted 07-07-99 08:46 AM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mia

I've been running
all the way to nowhere
hiding behind those glass walls
that you have raised aroung me
to keep me from myself
I've been spitting lies
in the world's face
to be what you needed me to be
forsaking myself
forgetting who I was
I had to be that perfect picture
you would hang over the fireplace
I was hung
I am still hagning over the fire
burning
to please you daddy
© Copyright 1999 mia - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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This is a very powerful and moving piece.
blueloon
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Another job well done, Mia. Very touching and speaks much truth to the reader.

blueloon
 
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