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Poet deVine
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0 posted 07-06-99 11:09 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Poet deVine

You take pen in hand
and I sigh.

Holding my breath
you know why.

The words you cannot
say to me

Come from your pen
most eloquently.

I wait to read
words you never speak

Words that thrill me
and leave me weak

Your truth is pure
your soul sublime

I hunger for each
loving rhyme

And though our bodies
never meet

Iíve felt your touch
in your words, my sweet.
© Copyright 1999 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
IsabelleSkye
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1 posted 07-06-99 11:12 PM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

DeVine.....
I have been there, and AM there.
WOW you have such talent!
Thanks for being a great part of this place
Izzy
Sally S.
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since 06-07-99
Posts 887
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2 posted 07-06-99 11:18 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

How lovely. What a beautiful sentiment. Nicely done, Poet.



Balladeer
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3 posted 07-06-99 11:21 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

deVine one, this is truly beautifully done. No words wasted and the meaning loud and clear. Excellent job!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


4 posted 07-07-99 09:03 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Dear Poet o'mine
it is not simply your words that rhyme
for your soul sings aloud in time
and to that height we wish to climb.

I've been on the other end of this complaint
with a mate who shows no restraint
he cannot understand why the words flow on
nor why I need to release them before I'm gone.

No romantic bone in his body true
He is more meat and potatoes; I'm the stew
He is black and white, and I see a lot of grey
So I'm glad you are here, to make my day.

------------------
Sunshine

Words will always express our feelings true.
KRJ


sea_of_okc
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since 06-15-99
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5 posted 07-07-99 09:09 AM       View Profile for sea_of_okc   Email sea_of_okc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sea_of_okc

Ahhh deVine one, this is lovely! I hope my lady feels like this about the things I write for her Thank you for sharing your very touching verse with us :P <<<--- there's a thrill for ya... HA!!

Hey!!! why doesn't a P make a face with the tongue sticking out????? That is just not right!!!

[This message has been edited by sea_of_okc (edited 07-07-99).]
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


6 posted 07-07-99 09:10 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nice piece........ah, could we all be so fortunate!
passing shadows
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displaced


7 posted 01-04-2003 04:35 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

*sigh* *smile*
timothysangel1973
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Never close enough


8 posted 04-23-2005 01:31 AM       View Profile for timothysangel1973   Email timothysangel1973   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit timothysangel1973's Home Page   View IP for timothysangel1973

Gosh... how come I never found this till now (probably had something to do with me not ever looking I'm sure lol)

Anyhoo.... this is so strong and beautiful...much loved m'friend

Tima
LadyTom
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9 posted 03-07-2008 05:34 PM       View Profile for LadyTom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LadyTom

Beautiful!!
 
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