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Sally S.
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0 posted 1999-07-06 10:46 PM


Walk with me in the soft morning light.
Remember the feelings of holding me tight.
Take me in moonlight. Forget all the past.
This time we will cherish. This moment will last.

Let me embrace your passionate smile.
Entombed in my senses, your alluring wile.
Hold in your heart my one constant wish.
To enrapture my soul with one subtle kiss.

Becharm me with those wonderous eyes,
While watching the sunset descending the sky.
Feel my words breath softly against your cheek.
They tell of three words my heart does seek.

Will you say them in the soft morning light?
Or else in the moonlight whisper "goodnight"?
Would your eyes tell me my dreams have come true?
Will you breathlessly tell me..."I Love You"?

© Copyright 1999 Sally - All Rights Reserved
Balladeer
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1 posted 1999-07-06 11:01 PM


Oh. I thought they were "what's for lunch?" Goes to show what I know!

You know I'm kiddin',sweet Sally. The sentiment is beautiful.

Sally S.
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2 posted 1999-07-06 11:07 PM


Hee Hee....What happened to the grump? All gone? Well, thank you my dear. You're always very kind.

P.S. As to "what's for lunch"....I promise...no venison. LOL OOOO..was that a whole in one?

Poet deVine
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3 posted 1999-07-06 11:11 PM


Lovely poem. There was a rhythm there that lulls one into a peaceful romantic state..
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4 posted 1999-07-06 11:12 PM


Three points and a foul shot coming for the double S gal!
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 1999-07-07 09:23 AM


Very nice rhyme and rythym in this one...I love the way it almost sings!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Sally S.
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6 posted 1999-07-07 09:39 PM


Thank you all for the nice compliments. What a great bunch! Shucks...LOL
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