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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I’ve lost a very important and dear part of me something tangible but that no one can now see especially now, and I could be so deep in despair knowing that what once was is no longer there. From the teenage times of so very long ago I hand-wrote words and words of winsome prose I saved them close to me over all of this time but never more can I say they are mine. Childish writing with wisdom so deep for the young words tripped either lightly or heavily off of my glib tongue. Remembering when my Mom read my poem so deep for she hugged me tightly as if my soul to keep. Now those words are forever gone lost are the pages that I kept for so long. And my aged mind will never bring the words new, now so with heavy heart, and anxious hand, I will begin again, I vow. But oh, I wish I could once again run through the words of a teenager, a mother brand new; to see the words of love gone wrong to hear again the upbeat tempo in the silent song. To my hard-drive I will save this little rhyme now and remember conspicuously when it is time now to save not only once but twice and more and just for posterity’s sake, I’ll shove the floppy in the door! ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is so true! Hanging on to the words, the feelings, the emotions felt in our youth is so very important..and, yet, they do have a way of getting lost..... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This poem put the fear of God into me! I'm going to save my poetry on disks, hard copies and burn them onto a CD! I understand what you're saying. It's sad to think of them gone! But they are memories that made you who you are today and that's a good thing! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To know that my two favorite poets would take notice...well, My Wednesday is now compleat! ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. KRJ |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
heavily i sigh, knowing that feeling well...as a girl, i wrote, then it all went to hell...that long-lost prose and poetry of mine...slowly i nod, for we can't capture time ------------------ i never call a poem "nice" or such, for that would not be saying much |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dearest sister of heart, this is so true those feelings, words and days are gone, but also not. They are eternally present, to be remembered, to be recalled by an aroma, a word, o touch. Love this Kari, absolutely love it. love as always Puck    Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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