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mia
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since 1999-07-06
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0 posted 1999-07-06 12:51 PM



I can't breath when he passes his hands on me
to keep this moment alive until I melt
I return home to his arms
I return home to myself
oh, to fall into him so softly...
so hard
to forget myself once more
to remember last night
when he washed away
with the tide
drunk on midnight wine
dancing in a teardrop
slowly becoming him
and feeling his love for me

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doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 1999-07-09 09:53 PM


Very lovely, Mia. I especially like the lines, "drunk on midnight wine/dancing in a teardrop".... wish I wrote that!
dp

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