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mia
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since 1999-07-06
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0 posted 1999-07-06 12:27 PM


love,
let me live in this moment forever
and when the second passes
and you fade away...
take me with you

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Talia
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 25
Colorado Springs, CO, USA
1 posted 1999-07-06 12:33 PM


Oh...how I know the feeling. You do a wonderful job of capturing it with so few lines.
mia
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 118

2 posted 1999-07-06 02:14 PM


thanks,
that was the first time ever that I have shared my work...Feels funny still... I read all your posted work... I realy liked it...

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