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The Forest

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Tim
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0 posted 07-06-99 12:18 PM       View Profile for Tim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tim

He stood alone
Amidst the tranquil wonder of the forest
An unsatisfied yearning
To be touched by the freshening breeze
Would he hear
The intonations of the whispering wind
And be sated?
Enveloped by the magnetic charms of the wild?
He felt the gentle touch of
Silken lips
Softly pressed against his brow
Soothing warmth
Of elfin graces and earthly splendor.
He had sought
Beneath the heaven's shining stars
And he found
Amongst the forest, amid the feral creatures
Hearts desire.

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1 posted 07-06-99 11:37 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Tim, for a desert dweller, this poem was manna from heaven! I could smell the pines! Nicely done!
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Lovely poem Tim. Really enjoyed it, thanks!
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Tim wonderful poem.Happy writing.
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...and there you have it!! a writer who does exceptional structured poetry who also has an innate gift for free verse... It's all in the imagery, folks

Very nice, Tim
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5 posted 07-26-99 05:36 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Tim, this is the best construction I've seen from you. You made every word count and blended them beautifully.



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Tim, This was delightful.
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