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ma, usa


0 posted 07-06-99 11:16 AM       View Profile for evolution   Email evolution   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for evolution

i can still taste your breath from that first impromptu kiss
the way my rogue fingers navigated across your skin
the crisp November air held at bay by the warmth of my passion for you
in that moment the world fell away
and there was just us
i breathe you in
reluctant to exhale
just wanting to savor you
savor us, here, now
your sweat glistens on your body
i wear it, as i wear you
it all blends as we fuse into one
one thing, one entity
only temporary, for things of such great magnitude never last
sustaining euphoria is an attempt in futility
but that moment, that single moment, is worth trying for
you are worth trying for
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1 posted 07-06-99 02:33 PM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mia

In all the poems that I have read today... yours is my favorite. You have captured that moment so perfectly and your poem helps me replay in my head over and over that one second when love is consumed
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2 posted 07-16-99 01:03 PM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mia

Had'nt read you in a while... so back to the top of the pile you go... Hopefully we will hear from you soon... your work is beautiful...

mia

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