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elvira
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Welcome to the family! Loved your poem.
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Very nice elvira, love them medieval themes!
You obviously have not read the poems on the adult site! This one is fine where it is...
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Nicely done. I also enjoyed the medieval theme. If you like, seek out "A Soldier's Life," my own attempt at such.
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Those days of chivalry... and (k)nights so longed for
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You have a way with rythym in your poetry that is hard to find. I'm a medieval "freak" and found your poem very enjoyable.
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Dearest "Elvira" of Oak Ridge Boys Fame,
I truly wish you were _my_ serving dame,

Despite your previous claims that you may be plain,
I'll have to confess I'm in love with your brain.
(Or at least the part that writes poetry!)

However, I did feel this was a little _too_ naughy and was VERY deeply offended !

PW

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Poetwheel
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Elvira, sadly, the only women allowed to sail with that motley crew are the ones willing to share their undergarments. Surely there must be better company to keep.

PW

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elvira

Naughty girl! I love it. Besides, "attending to thee" could mean breakfast in bed, or finding the remote control for the wandering minstrals, right?
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