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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Loved your poem.  |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Very nice elvira, love them medieval themes! You obviously have not read the poems on the adult site! This one is fine where it is... |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Nicely done. I also enjoyed the medieval theme. If you like, seek out "A Soldier's Life," my own attempt at such. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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CastleHoward Junior Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 20 |
Those days of chivalry... and (k)nights so longed for  |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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guiltborn Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 30South Dakota |
You have a way with rythym in your poetry that is hard to find. I'm a medieval "freak" and found your poem very enjoyable. |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
Dearest "Elvira" of Oak Ridge Boys Fame, I truly wish you were _my_ serving dame, Despite your previous claims that you may be plain, I'll have to confess I'm in love with your brain. (Or at least the part that writes poetry!) However, I did feel this was a little _too_ naughy and was VERY deeply offended  !PW ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://www.stormloader.com/poetwheel/den.html ICQ: 44370408 [This message has been edited by Poetwheel (edited 07-27-99).] |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
Elvira, sadly, the only women allowed to sail with that motley crew are the ones willing to share their undergarments. Surely there must be better company to keep. PW ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://www.stormloader.com/poetwheel/den.html ICQ: 44370408 [This message has been edited by Poetwheel (edited 07-27-99).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
elvira Naughty girl! I love it. Besides, "attending to thee" could mean breakfast in bed, or finding the remote control for the wandering minstrals, right? |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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