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Talia
Junior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 25
Colorado Springs, CO, USA

0 posted 1999-07-06 01:49 AM


As the story
Unfolds here
I bring you to
A place of fear

Hellish voices
Darkened clouds
No one hears you
Scream aloud

Then you here it
Your eyes widen
Panicked searching
A place to hide in

Ackward voices
Devilish laughter
You now are prey
That they are after

Heart is pounding
You run in stride
No hope in leaving
This hellish night

Twist and turning
Ghosts arise
Trees move closer
Before your eyes

Useless crying
Help won't come
Thunder booming
Your body's numb

You trip and stumble
Soft cool grass
From the ground
Hands do grasp

Now not moving
Held too tight
Hear the voice
See the light

The grasp is loosened
Then disappeared
Fear forgotten
God is near

You shout in praise
The light brightens
Now accepting
You're inside it

Fingers tingle
Heart is full
God is savior
From this world

You've been taken
To live with God
A piece was placed
Where it was not


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-Talia

© Copyright 1999 Talia - All Rights Reserved
Enrique
Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 52
San Juan, PR
1 posted 1999-07-06 01:52 AM


I like u'r poem. Nice work.
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