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A Drop of PainŠ

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Genea
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0 posted 07-06-99 12:26 AM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Genea

A piece of your mind and none of your heart
That's all you gave me right from the start.
I should have ignored you, instead I hung around
Thinking you'd love me, I was spellbound.

One day I saw clouds and knew there’d be rain
But did not imagine there’d be so much pain.
Pain fell upon me one drop at a time
Flooding my life, no sun would shine.

I stood in a puddle with my feet soaking wet.
Your stinging words I’d never forget.
And to think it all started with one drop of pain
Changing my life so it’s never been the same.
© Copyright 1999 Genea - All Rights Reserved
Lil Angel
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1 posted 07-06-99 12:33 AM       View Profile for Lil Angel   Email Lil Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lil Angel

wow....powerful poem...nicely done...
Genea
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2 posted 07-06-99 12:44 AM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

thanks and welcome to Open Poetry!
DreamEvil
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3 posted 07-06-99 01:34 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Very nice job, expresses some of the same sentiment I feel.

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hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 07-06-99 08:42 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

A moving piece, like the subject matter, think we have all been there at one point or another
Genea
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5 posted 07-06-99 09:17 AM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

Dream,

Thanks and glad u found a connection with it. As background....it was raining when i wrote this. I find it easy to write in the rain. There is so much to experience if you open urself up to it.
~Genea
Genea
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6 posted 07-06-99 09:42 AM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

hoot,
thanks for reading. I try to write poetry that reflects life around me and if someone else can relate, GREAT!
~Genea
ac
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7 posted 07-06-99 05:56 PM       View Profile for ac   Email ac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ac

it's a wonderful poem...it's just a shame i've been able live it...a couple of times too many...
yumna
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8 posted 07-06-99 06:35 PM       View Profile for yumna   Email yumna   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for yumna

a touching poem. very good
Genea
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9 posted 07-06-99 06:43 PM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

ac,
i am sorry too, that u have experienced it, especially more than once. Here's hoping it does not happen again!

yumna,
thanks!

~Genea

[This message has been edited by Genea (edited 07-06-99).]

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