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The cruise

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Enrique
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since 07-04-99
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San Juan, PR


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I sat and watched you walking 'round,
Looking lost, but my eyes found,
Something deep within your eyes,
Which I knew could change both our lives.
A beautiful girl with matching stride,
But needing someone by her side,
So I held her close and smiled bright,
We talked and laughed and danced all night.
In the end my heart jumped in,
So I backed away and made new friends,
When you were gone, but your memory here,
I couldn't stop missing you or control my tears,
I care about you and miss you more,
Because you are all that I'm thinking of, you're the one I adore.


- Enrique
© Copyright 1999 Enrique - All Rights Reserved
Lil Angel
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1 posted 07-06-99 12:29 AM       View Profile for Lil Angel   Email Lil Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lil Angel

this is the one I like best so far....excellent job.....you're a true poet....
 
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