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Alain DeLaCendres
Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 119
Ohio

0 posted 1999-07-06 12:13 PM


If your eyes
could be distilled
into a sparkling blue wine,
I would gladly become an alcoholic.

2:23am / 6-5-99

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Tout s'en va, tout passe, l'eau coule, et le couer oublie.

© Copyright 1999 Alain DeLaCendres - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-07-06 08:46 AM


Yes!!!!!
This poem says all it needs to say in very few words, direct, to the point, and I like it!!

Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 1999-07-06 01:54 PM


Ahhh, Paul Newman.

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Sunshine

Words will always express our feelings true


mia
Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 118

3 posted 1999-07-06 02:09 PM


De toute beauté...
elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
4 posted 1999-07-14 08:06 PM


and...if love could be brewed into beer, i'd always want a six-pack near

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Tribute to M.J. ... My One and Only ... Childhood Memories ... your countenance ... hoarse whispers ... serving wench ... stolen hours ... devotion ... Master



[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 07-14-99).]

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