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Enrique
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since 07-04-99
Posts 52
San Juan, PR


0 posted 07-05-99 10:12 PM       View Profile for Enrique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enrique

The nights seem colder,
The days seem slower,
The sun seems brighter,
I'm falling in love.

I need you here,
I need your touch,
I need you beside me,
I'm falling in love.

You are scared,
You are confused,
You're afraid to fall,
But you're falling in love.

You can't run,
You can't hide,
You can't escape it,
You're falling in love.

We want to be together,
We want each other,
We want to be cared for,
We're falling in love.

We're learning to love,
We're learning to share,
We're learning to care,
We're falling in love.

That's all I can say,
That's all I can write,
That's all I can think about,
I'm falling in love.

It's all gonna work out,
It'll all be fine,
It's gonna take time,
I'm falling in love,
And I'm falling in love with you.

- Enrique
© Copyright 1999 Enrique - All Rights Reserved
Lil Angel
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since 07-03-99
Posts 21


1 posted 07-05-99 11:40 PM       View Profile for Lil Angel   Email Lil Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lil Angel

I like your poetry...I hope to see more of your work...
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 07-06-99 08:44 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I'm not sure exactly why, call me a fool for those love poems, but I really liked this one.
 
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