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Glorious Love

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 07-05-99 10:07 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I want to crow to the world the way that I feel, to let everyone know
That she
is perfectly the one for me.

From high atop this balcony, this height she has risen me to, I survey and purvey
And try to decide
Who will be my sacrifice to her
Tonight.

I wish to spell out my love with true artistry, with beauty and grace and attention to detail.
The same suffering again and again makes me lose face and jaded hearts cry to no
Avail.

My spirits are lifted, my heart is made gay, her love has lifted my soul, banishing the gray. I used to long for the night, it's every delight, now I long for the
Day.

What can I do to show my love, my Darkness appeals to her. Hearts and flowers, I know nothing of, unless you count being a butcher.

Compassion and courtesy just have never appealed
To me you see,
I am more the kind to play with your mind and toss
You away
But now I find
She brings out the best in me.




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Lil Angel
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1 posted 07-06-99 12:11 AM       View Profile for Lil Angel   Email Lil Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lil Angel

I thought you did a great job at writing this poem...I liked it...
DreamEvil
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2 posted 07-06-99 01:31 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Truly?! Most don't like the Darkness. Thank you.

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thursdayschild
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3 posted 07-06-99 02:03 AM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

Wow! You truly express how love can lift
one to a higher place...from the chasm
of shadows, let love light the way...
great poem!
DreamEvil
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4 posted 07-06-99 02:28 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you very much, I'll be looking for your work as well.
Genea
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5 posted 07-06-99 09:34 AM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

is this about a vampire? It just sounds like the speaker is a vampire
i.e. same suffering again and again, i used to long for the night with its every delight.
DreamEvil
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6 posted 07-07-99 01:44 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Very perceptive!! Thank you for noticing!!
elvira
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7 posted 07-12-99 01:15 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

take me, take me, i shout with glee, oh - to be a vampire, feeling the eternal fire


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DreamEvil
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8 posted 07-12-99 02:07 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you!! Try part 2. Impossible love.
~one voice~
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9 posted 07-12-99 05:38 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Your words inspire me to be all that I can.

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~one voice~

For Myself, I live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James
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10 posted 07-12-99 09:43 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

One voice, that is the greatest compliment, anyone could give me and my work. Thank you.
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