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Enrique
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since 07-04-99
Posts 52
San Juan, PR


0 posted 07-05-99 07:31 PM       View Profile for Enrique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enrique

Rain drops like tears
fall down on my face
Tried to run from my fears
but I've lost the race

So cold and dark outside
like the feeling in my heart
I've cried and I've cried
since we've been apart

I stand in the rain
and let it wash over me
Please take away this pain
oh why must this be

The rain comes harder and harder
it will never be through
I should have been smarter
than to fall in love with you

The wind is getting stronger
can it blow away this ache
If you stay away any longer
surely my heart will break

The rain is getting stronger
it pounds on my face
Tell me how much longer
will I be stuck in this place...

- Enrique
© Copyright 1999 Enrique - All Rights Reserved
Lil Angel
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since 07-03-99
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1 posted 07-05-99 11:32 PM       View Profile for Lil Angel   Email Lil Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lil Angel

Your poem was very touching...I liked it...
Moonlight
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since 06-25-99
Posts 105
Auburn, Alabama USA


2 posted 07-05-99 11:46 PM       View Profile for Moonlight   Email Moonlight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonlight's Home Page   View IP for Moonlight

ah, standing in the rain...i love doing that.
Very nice poem - it has a nice feel to it. I like the rain, so I'm biased

~m~
Enrique
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since 07-04-99
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3 posted 07-05-99 11:51 PM       View Profile for Enrique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enrique

Thanks
ac
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since 06-17-99
Posts 132
Cayey, PR - USA


4 posted 07-06-99 05:46 PM       View Profile for ac   Email ac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ac

if only the pounding of the rain could wash away at least some of our sorrows...sigh--very touching...you reminded of something i try hard not to forget...
 
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