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Enrique
Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 52
San Juan, PR

0 posted 1999-07-05 07:25 PM


The sun rises on the horizon,
beginning another day of never ending love
I look to the west and see her eyes in the dark blue sky,
the stars twinkle like her eyes every where
I turn to the east and see her hair in the glowing sun,
warming me from within
I see her face in the clouds,
smiling at me where ever I go
A wind blows across my shoulders,
and it is like her breath on my neck
When it rains I imagine it is her tears falling on me,
tears of joy that will never end

At night she is always there,
her voice calls to me from every where
We are always together in my dreams,
two lovers locked in a never ending embrace
She kisses me and it is like the sweetest chocolate,
a taste that stays with me forever
Her embrace warms me like the hottest of fires,
I am never cold with her near
She smiles and my heart is sent flying across the sky,
a flight of never ending happiness

I sit outside on a cold winters night,
the snow is falling from the sky
A coat of white covers everything,
the earth kept warm under this blanket of white
I reach out and catch some snow,
I look and marvel at its beauty
The snow is unique and wondrous,
its quiet beauty sparkles in front of me
It is like holding her in my hand,
her essence in front of me
After a while I start to realize where she came from,
the answer in my hand
She has fallen from heaven into my arms,
a gift from above,
my own personal snowflake.

- Enrique

© Copyright 1999 Enrique - All Rights Reserved
Sally S.
Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847
Ohio
1 posted 1999-07-05 08:53 PM


Well, I hope you've shown her this. What a beautiful expression of your love. Very nice.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-07-05 09:01 PM


Very eloquent.........what a wonderful expression of love at it's best.
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