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Open Poetry #1

Especially for jfreak

Genea
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 321
USA

0 posted 1999-07-05 12:55 PM

Oh Maudlin Morning!©

Oh maudline morning!
Don't weep for me!
In my weakness, darkest fears found me,
Then sleep, like a white winter panel
Silently shrouded my world.
In my dream, I was a runner,
Flannel jacket zipped tight to keep out the crisp cold.
I ran with strong swift strides,
Racing time uphill.
The sound of rain mocked me,
And I awakened,
Still locked in,
With unmoving limbs.
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How is this one, jfreak?

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 1999-07-05 03:26 PM

Very well written! You should be proud of this work. I especially like the line, "Racing time uphill".

Genea
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 321
USA

2 posted 1999-07-05 05:22 PM

thanks so much...that is how i feel age is at times....like racing uphill.

~Genea

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