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Genea
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0 posted 07-05-99 12:55 PM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Genea

Oh Maudlin Morning!

Oh maudline morning!
Don't weep for me!
In my weakness, darkest fears found me,
Then sleep, like a white winter panel
Silently shrouded my world.
In my dream, I was a runner,
Flannel jacket zipped tight to keep out the crisp cold.
I ran with strong swift strides,
Racing time uphill.
The sound of rain mocked me,
And I awakened,
Still locked in,
With unmoving limbs.
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How is this one, jfreak?
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1 posted 07-05-99 03:26 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

Very well written! You should be proud of this work. I especially like the line, "Racing time uphill".
Genea
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2 posted 07-05-99 05:22 PM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

thanks so much...that is how i feel age is at times....like racing uphill.

~Genea
 
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