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My beautifull angel

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Enrique
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since 07-04-99
Posts 52
San Juan, PR


0 posted 07-05-99 01:26 AM       View Profile for Enrique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enrique


I sit in the darkness all alone
my demons tourment me with my feelings
they have stripped me of all happiness
and hope
all i do now is pray for some sort of
savior
to deliver me from this hell i have for so long lived in
a ray of light breaks the darkness
causing my demons to scatter
and i see you
i look into your eyes as you extend your hand
as i grasp your hand hope overfills my body
i have longed for this moment for so long now
i thought it was out of reach
far to gone to be had again
but now i might have it back...


- Enrique
© Copyright 1999 Enrique - All Rights Reserved
jfreak
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since 06-17-99
Posts 311
Yuma, AZ, USA


1 posted 07-05-99 04:40 AM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

Very deep. I like what you are saying here. It flows well without rhyme. That is not an easy task. It isn't the best I have ever read, but it sure isn't the worst. Good poem. Look forward to more.

jfreak
 
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