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Enrique
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since 1999-07-04
Posts 52
San Juan, PR

0 posted 1999-07-04 11:00 PM


Walking by, seeing the grass so long,
Remembering how my heart had for gone,
The love I had for you.
The love I wished I knew,
Love that was kept inside.
I tried many times,
But my heart decided to hide.
Thinking about you overtime.

The sound of the birds singing,
Always made your name ringing,
Ringing inside my head,
As I lay to rest in bed.

Should've told you how I felt,
Should've told you how my heart melts,
When you got close to me.
Now I sit here alone, my heart in a painful moan.
Lonely on the bench, looking out to the endless sea.

The sound of the birds singing,
Always made your name ringing,
Ringing inside my head,
As I lay to rest in bed.

The feeling of the wind blowing,
Always kept my heart going.
Everytime I blink,
Memories that should've been,
Made me think.
About how a fool I have been.

The sound of the birds singing,
Always made your name ringing,
Ringing inside my head,
As I lay to rest in bed.

Standing here, looking over the hills,
Wishing I had a dear, to wipe my tears.
Now, my heart is left to be still.
All I have is my lonely will.

- Enrique

[This message has been edited by Enrique (edited 07-04-99).]

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Artur Hawkwing
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since 1999-06-30
Posts 444
USA
1 posted 1999-07-05 02:30 AM


wow.... enchanting in the way it is put, the sound of the birds singing. This is one I definitely liked a lot.......

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"Tis only another passing day....", my own personal quote!

Kelly
Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 145

2 posted 1999-07-05 12:20 PM


I too have been in a circle of regret.
You did a great job of expressing that feeling.

Enrique
Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 52
San Juan, PR
3 posted 1999-07-05 07:07 PM


Thanks..
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