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Christina Myers
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0 posted 07-04-99 10:22 AM       View Profile for Christina Myers   Email Christina Myers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Christina Myers's Home Page   View IP for Christina Myers

Your candy-appled tongue
graced my body with pleasure
and the rippled effect
took hold
and wrung my heart dry-

So as the water breaks
off the cliff of your hands
you soar
like the waves in my hair...
high above
and
lost in a cloud.


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And I thought: this is how poetry is born. It comes from invisible heights, it is secret and dark in its origins, solitary and fragrant, and like the river it will assimilate whatever falls in its current; it will seek a route between the mountains, and its crystalline song will ripple through the meadows."- Pablo Neruda
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1 posted 07-04-99 12:18 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Wow, I really liked the way your phrases flowed in this one. excellent!
Christina Myers
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thanks dreamer... and thank you for taking the time to read and remark on the poems I posted. It really means a lot.


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Created with the precision of an artist of our craft. Well done, Christina. If we don't use words to the fullest of their abilities, then what's a meta-for?
 
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