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Ominous
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0 posted 07-04-99 05:32 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

The sheer beauty,
just takes my breath away,
The colors of the rainbow,
reflecting off the lake.

The water so calm and peaceful,
A melancholic green.
Out where you are one with yourself,
out where you are free.

The sun peaks through the clouds,
as if to show us the way.
The way to pure happiness,
and the peace of which we pray.

The majestic beauty of it all,
the beauty found only in dreams,
the beauty God has created,
now lives and grows through me.

For I have seen this glorious place,
where the sun shines oh so bright.
The beauty has touched my very soul,
and ended years of plight.


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I am but a shadow, lost within this world of darkness
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Kelly
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1 posted 07-04-99 05:41 AM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

Very good. I also enjoyed the one about the lone wolf.
Poet deVine
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2 posted 07-04-99 10:10 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! Lovely poem, I look forward to reading more from you!
Lost Dreamer
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3 posted 07-04-99 12:09 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Very good, you captured my senses and took me away to this beautiful place.
Artur Hawkwing
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4 posted 07-05-99 02:10 AM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

Just hanging around the second page tonight.. Love this, the way the land is enhanced through the senses. You've got ambiance on your winning side.
DreamEvil
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5 posted 07-05-99 04:43 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Great work, dear. I look forward to more.

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I would devour you save that you would no longer be there.

Ominous
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6 posted 07-06-99 12:36 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

I thank you all for your wonderful words.
It gives me great joy that others can share what I feel, through my writing.
Ominous
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7 posted 07-26-99 03:14 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

=)
elvira
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8 posted 07-26-99 03:40 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

a lovely positive message...good to see your poetry isn't always blue

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If I had my mouth I would bite.
If I had my liberty I would do my liking.
In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~
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