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Ominous
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since 07-04-99
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0 posted 07-04-99 05:08 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

I wish I could understand what's
going on inside my head.
But I can't, so no one can help me.
It feels like a war,
a war of emotions and thoughts.
That's the only way I know how to explain it.
I don't even know how to help myself.
So no one can help me.
I can't eat, I can't sleep.
All I can do is cry and try to understand.
But I don't understand, no one does.
No one even tries.
It hurts, I feel torn apart.
I hate everyone, everything, the whole world.
And no one understands.
So no one can help me.


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I am but a shadow, lost within this world of darkness
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DreamEvil
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1 posted 07-04-99 05:12 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I do understand. Nice melancholy piece.

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I would devour you save that you would no longer be there.

Ominous
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2 posted 07-06-99 12:41 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

My deepest thanx go to you DreamEvil.
Ominous
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3 posted 07-26-99 03:11 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

Just want to again express my gratitude towards you Dream.
angel girl
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4 posted 07-26-99 09:12 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

trust me, i do know how you feel.
oh, i live your poetry. it's very good and i can relate to it- something i haven't been able to do in a long time.
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