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Faded Shadows

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Kelly
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0 posted 07-04-99 03:20 AM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kelly

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[This message has been edited by Kelly (edited 08-22-99).]
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Sally S.
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1 posted 07-05-99 08:34 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

It's not too long....it's beautiful just as it is. This poem was very well written and I'm sure you're very proud of it. It's very moving. Thank you for sharing it.
hoot_owl_rn
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I think there are a few lines that could still be removed in this poem without changing it's meaning, but over all, it says a lot and the last two line....powerful ending.
Kelly
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Thank you for the kind remarks.
r. baker33
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4 posted 07-06-99 02:15 PM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

Great poem Kelly,some of the greatest poetry
in the world doesn't come from what we see.
it comes from what we feel,and our own
griefs,and sorrows.some even speak words of
wisdom.

p.s. just wanted to say thanks for the most
recent feedback on the living creation.pat
yourself on the back.you helped inspire it.


r.baker33
 
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