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r. baker33
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0 posted 07-04-99 02:17 AM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

love is something that is born into us all.
it is a living creation that God has given
to all of us. it must be nourished,and
nurtured,as it is a living part of every soul.without the proper care, it will die.
just as death is the end of a human life.
the death of love, and human caring is the
end of a human soul.

all to often we hear the phrase fallen in
love. just a phase for infatuation,or a
spark. feelings that emerge from inside from
the dark.

love does't just happen. it is born like a
new born babe on it's first day of life.

just as a tree must have it's roots planted
firmly in earths soil,love must be planted
firmly in our human soul,so it can grow,and
flourish just like the oak.

as sure as a child must crawl before it can
walk.we must grow before we can take the
first steps of loving.
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Kelly
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1 posted 07-05-99 01:01 PM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

I really like this one. Can you make it longer? Not that it seems unfinished I just would like to read more.
r. baker33
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2 posted 07-05-99 04:44 PM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

kelly I"ll give it some thought,and give you
an update. Thanks for the feedback.

rbaker33
Kelly
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3 posted 07-06-99 04:05 AM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

That is so beautiful. You are very talented. Thanks for answering my request.
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